Solid world building and foreshadowing.
It's pretty incredible the contrast of pacing and tone between this and the first chapter, but I think it is quite smart to catch attention with a showy and skillful scene, and then flesh out the characters as you did here.
You did a good balance of show and tell with this piece, and foreshadowed future foes, mounting hardships, and soft revelations of character and motivation.
Small moments like these in a narrative can be huge, like the crew's banter in Firefly made that show memorable, and certainly not the early 2000s CG.
I think you had some missed opportunities with playing with the campfire's shadow's but that is a worn trope, often used to denote menace of the past or future.
Also your audio mixing in this piece was a little muddled, but for the level of effort you are putting else where is very understandable.
Maybe a few spare hours honing mixing would push your craft further, but I want to stress you are quite impressible proficient in many hats(jobs and skills).
Thank you for making this.