GnomeZome's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Faux Pause]

Man, clock crew keeps on ticking.
Seriously though this was actually a really fun series of transitions, a veritable slip and slide covered in koolaid of busting through 4th walls.
I also checked a moment ago, and B came out in 2001, wich means, of course, y'all are rapidly approaching your 20th B-day, and I hope you all have a great time with it.
Thank you for making this.

PannacottaClock responds:

I'm glad it was fun that's the one thing it tries to be

[Bankruptcy/Bandruptcy Fan animation]

Very dramatic.
I watched this twice, and I had some trouble understanding the narrative, but stylistically this is gorgeous.
It reminds me alot of another creator, Vinnie Veritas, who did some really interest flash work back in the day, and I think you might appreciate there style.
Over all, I feel like you made some very strong choices in camera angle and transitions, and I really like how you composited the cityscape from real buildings.
Thank you for making this.

MarcoCardenas responds:

Thanks for the feedback!, I'll keep that for future projects, and I'll take a look at Vinnie.

[Line Stickers]

I don't know much about line.
But those are some cute stickers, and I figure since that app is not always easy to get access to, there is no reason to knock you for showing off a bit.
A artist's note might make it a little bit more clear what you intentions are though.
Thank you for making this.

AiDarrian responds:

Thank you!
Line is an app where you can talk to friends and they have a store where you can buy stickers to send to them through messages.
They let people make they’re own stickers and you can upload to the store (after they approve them of course)
I make no money from it even though you can buy them, but I didn’t want them to go to complete waste and made this video. So I shall add a better description! Thank you for the feedback by the way! 😌

[Post Quarantine]

I really like your candor.
You go through some issues that are causing people a lot of stress in a fun and light hearted way, with out demeaning or down playing the problems we are facing.
I also liked you visual humor, and ability to mock yourself to put others at ease.
Thank you for making this.

MrBlueBowtie responds:

Hello there !
Thank you very much for putting this very kind review
And I'm really happy that you liked this video and it was able to improve your day even in the slightest bit

[Shaq to the Past]

Short and sweet.
I really love the excellent music, and the healthy doubts of the Dinos.
Also did Shaq save the Dinos from extinction, therefore preventing the age of Mammals, dooming himself and all of Mankind?
Inquiring minds need not be satisfied, as the chuckles do suffice.
Thank you for making this.

DavidBurt responds:

Thannk you!
The humans still show up, and they play basketball with the dinosaurs. There is no conflict between them because of the era of peace Shaq ushered in.

['Dogs of the Planet']

Fun, and amusing!
It's a nice hodge podge of good bois and I got a really great sense of positivity in my self, but also in your acting of crafting this, watching all the different dogs.
My favorite was the black smith doggo.
Thank you for making this.

Butzbo responds:

Wow thanks Putney! Glad to hear it adds some positivity :)

[The Birth of Byleth (Smash Bros Animation)]

Fair Enough.
It did, overall, seem like an odd choice on their part, choosing another Fire emblem character, but so it goes.
Thank you for making this.

lemonchello responds:

ok nerd lol

[MOZZIE]

The changing of "how to kill"
to
"how to get rid of a mosquito"
Tells us a huge amount about the character, how they view themselves, and how they want to be viewed.
The cracked screen is also a great indicator of their level of care to the world around them.
The action was lively, and it was really impressive to hear how the music's tone and arrangement would change to match the visuals.
I also personally see it as a high mark of character design and visual choreography if the the figure can be put through dynamic animations and color changes, and can still be recognizable, so that was quite well done.
Thank you for making this.

HochiganMeat responds:

thanks for the detailed response, glad you liked it :)

[In The Black Corner....Cookie!]

There is a really good diagram in the OG manga for Ghost in the Shell where Motoko explains that having an arm that mechanically lift something that the rest of the human form could not, would case injury, and a person Embiggening their limps is fine, and could lead to some really interesting wingchung style misdirection in fighting, I just technically focused on conservation of mass and consistency in ability.
But, if this is just porm thinking about the physics just silly.
In terms of stressing how physically small she is, you might want to be sure to include objects of a size most people are familiar with, and related to wrestling, so maybe a folding chair.
Thanks for making this.

Dral-Studio responds:

Thanks for this really insightful review. You've got the right idea on the misdirection style fighting that I'll be going for. And yeah I'm going for more of a light-magic/powers system, but I do really appreciate your insight on the ability.

And honestly, the more I plan this fight, the less and less it become porn and more and more just two sexy people fighting and grappling lol.

The size thing is a good point. The wrestling ring is actually made with WWE ring measurements, but I guess most people and even most wrestling fans actually wouldn't know how tall an turnbuckle actually is. So I'll definitely keep that in mind.

And thank you again for your time and review!