GnomeZome's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ancient Queen Tilly]

Hmm interesting.
Certainly some solid gothy vibes but I had some questions about her regalia.
Is the crown on fire, or is more aglow with radiant power?
If it is alight with flame do they move and crackle or are they silent?
Also does the crown hang stationary or rotate, and is it stationary when she walks or does it have any lag time?
For the waist belt, is it fashioned into the dress or is it magically secured, or just well made?
Do the rings on the horn come off?and If not are they added as the horns grow?
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Finally is that a flower or some sort of symbol on the chockers pendant?
In any case I appreciate your use of dramatic lighting and the nice shock of white hair she has on her left side.
Thank you for making this.

SiakStuff responds:

On the first point, the crown is on fire. I unfortunately have no idea how to paint fire. Maybe next time I'll try sculpting out the flames too.
Without proper fuel, the flames would be silent.
I'd imagine the crown was mostly stationary, and would only have a 'lag time' if she were to make sudden quick movements.
Her dress is split into two pieces (though that comes across poorly since I only had a limited time to work on it) and the belt is evenly hooked on the inside to keep the bottom portion fixated to the top. I did not sculpt the hooks or creases in the dress, but may do so for the next one.
The horn rings can be snapped off or back on easily, because reasons.
The pendant just has a random design that I'll probably change from piece to piece just for funsies.

[Commission sheet!]

yeah make that money!
Good luck on you commission hustle.
Thank you for making this.

Bunurrii responds:

Thank you!

[Bubbles drinking bubble tea]

I suppose in their shape and form, all bubbles are in fact Rubenesque in nature.
It seems tricky to drink bobba and chew gum, heck the wrong kinda bobba might melt the gum like eating chocolate with gum does.
In any case, I think you played around with the oddly porpotioned nature of the PPG in a fun way, and I appreciate how you made the big eyes work so well.
Thank you for making this.

Bunurrii responds:

Thank you!!!

[Taurus Titan]

Oh cooool.
I suppose they probably have quite the thick spine to support those horns.
Is Taurus Bipedal, Quadrupedal, or more like a bear where it can stand up for dominance displays and reaching for goodies?
Being able to stand tall for a moment is a big thing for goats, sheep, and rams so they can do a falling strike with their horns at least.
Ref: https://i.pinimg.com/originals/d4/13/03/d41303f93f23ab2f8bedd6ce41f038b8.jpg
Also I really do love the power metal hair, it's a strong look, and perhaps a hidden sensory organ of some sort, or a way of holding electric charge?
Thank you for making this.

SpaceDragon14 responds:

Thanks man!
Yeah, Strong neck and a kinda hunched back, He's bipedal !
About his powers, There isn't anything set in stone yet, So far his weapons are his horns and a thagomizer, Not sure if i wanna fall in the classic atomic breath power haha

[he lowkey thicc tho]

.......what an incredible scum bag face.
You had a goal, and I am afraid to say that you seem to have gotten there.
Thank you for making this.

Slumbrsloth responds:

thank You :)

[thoughts]

What a beautifully true mood.
I like the side eye, as you where able to convey a good amount of emotion especially paired with weariness of a seek in palm.
The face is being a strong blush helps break it from the curls of hair, and frantic cross hatched shirt.
It's a simple sketch, but I do enjoy how playful it is.
Thank you for making this.

koseta responds:

woow! thank you for making such an awesome comment!! It was a pleasure to read
btw, the blush is after tears

[Encounter]

Hmmm a tense clash.
With the reach and weight advantage Ganondorf is in a good spot to wait for link to open himself when striking in.
On the other hand Link's experience with the sword and board might be hoping to feint away or glance and strike to be able get past Ganondorf's reach.
It's a great face off.
Thank you for making this.

Xlyphon responds:

Glad you like it! also good analysis!

[Subscribestar Announcement!]

yo, good hustle, but the link is broken.
for those curious, this is the good link:
https://subscribestar.adult/corromon
and I pm-ed the artist as well.

Corromon responds:

Ty a ton man I was uploading these late last night and goofed up on the link so ty for the fix!

[Upgraded]

"Weird flex but ok"
I actually really like this, as it is quite stylish.
Blue and red can have some excellent contrast, and I think the backdrop has a balance of stylish detail and innocuous worldbuilding (at least modernish setting).
The Merch her self has a as solid outfit and a fittingly chaotic mismatched armor set which helps build a lot of character, even before her cackle.
The outline is a bold choice (heh) and I think you where right to use it to help with the definition, but I wonder about making it the same color of the energy that sparks off of her, so it has more of a quality of energy aura, though perfectly intense as is.
Thank you for making this.

Xlyphon responds:

Thanks a lot for the complete feedback, the flexing really didn't convince me either, and i'm glad that the aesthetic can be easily interpreted. I appreciate that you like it!

[[ANIMATION] Hand catching a coin]

That's flip'n awesome!
I like the coin going through a superstar flash as it turns, and the fair of the hand catching it and take on the rainbow aura are nice and subtle but give a great vibe.
This is a solid FP idle animation, but also skillful work on the hand and clever to make quick cooping motion more of a solid wedge shape opposed to separate fingers.
You definitely show you can render the individual digits, but I appreciate the skill in the choice to be efficient.
Thank you for making this.

Jectoons responds:

Thank you very much for your kind comments! I am glad that you like it. The rainbow stuff occurred to me as I was coloring, trying to make it look more interesting, hahaha.
Cheers!